I'm shocked, really really shocked. Something went wrong with the spell? Damn, I bet Amon is embarrassed about that, or he would be if he could find the time to be embarrassed while trying to hide that hard on.
Amon's list of things to do with Natalie 1. Sunbathing on a topless beach. 2. Long romantic strolls on the beach at sunset. 3. Dinner at a fancy restaurant with a formal dress code. 4. Long romantic stroll from the restaurant to the hotel. 5. Oops, only a single full-size bed in the hotel room. 6. More sunbathing on a NUDE beach. 7. Sharing a cozy hot tub in their suite, each evening. 8. Sightseeing in skimpy clothes. 9. Romantic ride in a horse-drawn carriage with just a small seat for two. 10. Romantic trip to the top of a nearby mountain under the full moon to set the mood for Amon to propose.
Sorry everyone - based on these comments I feel that the reaction to this series was that it was kind of stupid. I guess I kinda agree. I had a whole thing planned out, but it was probably predictable. I'll kill this series and try harder next time :)
Predictable... perhaps. But stupid??? I don't think so!!! Please, please, PLEASE, don't kill this story. As I have said before, I'm a sucker for a good best friend becomes the girlfriend story!
I'm sorry if I gave that impression, I was trying to be funny. Considering how much I love your caps, to be honest I assumed you might have another direction in mind. PLEASE continue this series just as you planned. I don't know who the model is but these are hot pictures and so far the writing is great.
Thanks for the follow up, everyone. I love the 'friend becomes girlfriend' stories too, and that's where this story was headed, but I don't want to fall into a predictable formula. Obviously it's not easy creating new ideas all the time. Sometimes I like the old standby tropes, other times I like to do something different. But I always want to be original.
I may continue this story, but in a different direction. It may even be better.
I'm shocked, really really shocked. Something went wrong with the spell? Damn, I bet Amon is embarrassed about that, or he would be if he could find the time to be embarrassed while trying to hide that hard on.
ReplyDeleteAmon's list of things to do with Natalie
ReplyDelete1. Sunbathing on a topless beach.
2. Long romantic strolls on the beach at sunset.
3. Dinner at a fancy restaurant with a formal dress code.
4. Long romantic stroll from the restaurant to the hotel.
5. Oops, only a single full-size bed in the hotel room.
6. More sunbathing on a NUDE beach.
7. Sharing a cozy hot tub in their suite, each evening.
8. Sightseeing in skimpy clothes.
9. Romantic ride in a horse-drawn carriage with just a small seat for two.
10. Romantic trip to the top of a nearby mountain under the full moon to set the mood for Amon to propose.
Oh it's gonna an life changing experience being a hot woman, that's gonna make Rob change his perspective of staying that way.
ReplyDeleteI just found out that the spell actually can't be reversed for the full length of our trip... Riiiiight! LOL
ReplyDeleteSorry everyone - based on these comments I feel that the reaction to this series was that it was kind of stupid. I guess I kinda agree. I had a whole thing planned out, but it was probably predictable. I'll kill this series and try harder next time :)
ReplyDeletePredictable... perhaps. But stupid??? I don't think so!!!
DeletePlease, please, PLEASE, don't kill this story.
As I have said before, I'm a sucker for a good best friend becomes the girlfriend story!
No, I think it's great! I'd love to hear more about his lesbian adventures
ReplyDeleteI'm sorry if I gave that impression, I was trying to be funny. Considering how much I love your caps, to be honest I assumed you might have another direction in mind.
ReplyDeletePLEASE continue this series just as you planned. I don't know who the model is but these are hot pictures and so far the writing is great.
By the way, the comment above is mine, I'm "Bashful", not sure why I can't log in right now to ID my comment.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the follow up, everyone. I love the 'friend becomes girlfriend' stories too, and that's where this story was headed, but I don't want to fall into a predictable formula. Obviously it's not easy creating new ideas all the time. Sometimes I like the old standby tropes, other times I like to do something different. But I always want to be original.
ReplyDeleteI may continue this story, but in a different direction. It may even be better.
Thanks for reading :)
Love your stories as this is one of the many. Am glad you still post here and not all to patreon.
Deletehumm. why do I feel the friend is up to soemthing?
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